diff --git a/My Mum Was An Alien She-Ra And Now I Am Too?! Will I be Able To Protect My Family End Everything Dear To Me Or Will I Fail And Let The Darkness Consume Everything/1.md b/My Mum Was An Alien She-Ra And Now I Am Too?! Will I be Able To Protect My Family End Everything Dear To Me Or Will I Fail And Let The Darkness Consume Everything/1.md
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+++ b/My Mum Was An Alien She-Ra And Now I Am Too?! Will I be Able To Protect My Family End Everything Dear To Me Or Will I Fail And Let The Darkness Consume Everything/1.md	
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 It was a rainy evening, the sunlight barely peeking through the dark clouds, so the world was dark, even if it was just after 17:00.
 
-She went up the few steps, closed her umbrella, went inside, quickly took of her shoes, barely remembered to lock the door and went to the kitchen.
+She went up the few steps, closed her umbrella, went inside, quickly took off her shoes, barely remembered to lock the door and went to the kitchen.
 
-"Hi dad"
+"Hi, dad"
 
 "Hi, love. Dinner will be in..."